Thursday, April 21, 2016

Dave's Anatomy: My History As a Writer #54: "Angelique"




Angels have always been a topic of interest for the human race, from the Bible days onward. They came as messengers of God or the gods (our word angel is derived from the Greek word angelos, which means "messenger"). They carried messages from Heaven to Earth. In the Bible, people almost crapped their pants when they saw an angel; messengers from heaven are scary! C. S. Lewis once commented that angels in the Bible always said, "Fear not," when they first appear; but in the popular depictions of angels one sees in Victorian literature, he noted, the angel looked as if she should say "There, there." And angels, by the way, were always male, not female, in sacred texts. But what about a quirky angel—one that was quite different from stereotypes? An angel who is a little edgy? Thus came the story "Angelique."

"Angelique" is not about an angel. It is about a young man who meets one and she is quite different from how he imagined angels would be. Tyler Foreman is in a relationship with Pella, who has repudiated a strict fundamentalist upbringing and lives with him. He works at software firm; Pella is trying to make it in the very competitive world of freelance photography. And Tyler has an attraction to Goth girls. Pella is not Goth and he has never dated such a woman, but he likes photos of them in his cubicle and as screen savers. He finds one he hangs as a pin-up:  Angelique. She has jet black hair, blue lipstick, heavy eye makeup, and is nude from the waist; rings piercing both nipples; tattoos covering her upper arms; black rose tattooed on her stomach; fishnet hose, long nails painted black, rings on all her fingers and both thumbs. That she is topless earns the censure of some of the female workers he knows.

Angelique
One day, after a long staff meeting, he returns to find the photograph of Angelique changed. She is now wearing a halter top and her tattoos are gone. Her sultry expression is gone and she seems to be smirking at him. He stares for a long time, assumes someone stole the picture and photo-shopped it, but does not try to get it back to its original state. And, as in Oscar Wilde's classic novel, The Picture of Dorian Grey, the photograph continues to change, and not in a small way. The model changes from a woman of European origins to an Indian woman with brown skin, large, lustrous eyes, and long black hair. He keeps waiting for his friends, whom he is sure have sabotaged the photo, to come out of hiding, laughing, and admit the prank. But they don't.

Pella
At the same time, Pella eventually begins to experience unexpected success. The editor of The New Yorker wants to use two of photographs. Soon after informing her of this, he picks two more and wants her to send him a portfolio. And, for the first time in her career, she is paid a substantial sum of money for her shots. Pella quips, "I think my guardian angel hasn’t left town after all.” They go out to celebrate. While they are dancing, Tyler suddenly gets an overwhelming impression that he should go to a local hotdog place called Yesterdog. He excuses himself and goes there. Angelique, Pella's guardian angel, is there waiting for him.

She does not fit the stereotype. She is not blonde and fair-skinned (as angels are usually depicted). Here is a little of their encounter:

“Angelique?” he asked.
“You were expecting, maybe, Alexander’s Ragtime Band?  I thought you’d never get here. Sit down.”
            He slid into the seat across from her. He noticed she had two hot dogs and an A&W root beer. Three dogs and a Canada Dry Ginger Ale (his favorite soft drink) sat on his side of the table.
            As she stuffed the end of a hot dog in her mouth, he studied her face. No doubt about it. She was the girl in the photograph:  the brown skin, lustrous black hair, brown eyes—only she wore a white minidress and white knee-boots, like a go-go dancer from the sixties. The white costume made her skin more lovely, her eyes more full of mystery and depth.
            She pointed to his hot dog. “Eat,” she ordered. He obediently ate one and then another. She wiped her mouth.
            “If you’re an angel,” he began, but he stopped.
            “Why am I not a white blondie with wings and a halo? Stereotypes. Since a lot of white people started believing, there are more ángeles blancos these days, but that’s only been in the last fourteen-hundred years or so. Prior to that, believers were almost all from Africa, Asia, and the Middle East, and I came along in your year 694, back when most of us guardians were fashioned to resemble, as you say today, people of color.”
            “Guardian? You’re a guardian angel?”
            “You said it yourself.”

It seems that though Pella has repudiated her childhood faith, her guardian angel has not repudiated her. Tyler asks if she has come to protect Pella from him. She tells him, to his astonishment, no, she has come to protect him.

She explains this and also why she altered the picture. Tyler's liking for Goth girls, she informs him, is symptomatic of his need for a "back door"—something to illustrate to him he can leave Pella if he needs to, though he doesn't want to now. That however, may change. Pella, Angelique says, is on the verge of fantastic success as a photographer. She will become one of the wealthiest and most famous photographers in the world. He will have the role of her husband. Because of this, he will be tempted to leave her. He thinks Angelique wants to protect her from this, but she tells him it will be worse for him and that, if he stays with her, new and beautiful doors will open for him. He is a little miffed at learning that he is secondary to Pella in talent and potentiality, and when Angelique gets ready to leave he sarcastically asks if she's in a hurry because she's going off to get laid. "I might," she said. When he expresses surprise that angels can unite sexually, she tells him, “There’s a lot you don’t know about us. Read Milton. I’ve got to go.”

She leaves him there alone. After a while, he returns to the bar where he left Pella. 


It was a fun story to write. It appeared in Indigo Rising, a journl that ceased publication, but it looks like it has relaunched. I'm trying to get access to an archive and, if I do, will post a link.
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