Saturday, February 1, 2020

Dave’s Anatomy: My History as a Writer #132: Paradise Found: “The Way to Shangri-La.”


The human imagination has many different doors that open in various ways. I got the idea for the the story under discussion here from a library book, Last River: The Tragic Race for Shangri-La by Todd Balf, the tale of a group of American explorers who raft down the Yarlung Tsangpo, known in paddling circles as the "Everest of rivers." It was a fascinating book, especially because the territory through which they move is rumored to be the location of Shangri-La, the legendary land of spiritual magic and enchantment. My story took a little bit of a different direction. It did not turn out to be a story on rafting or on exploration, but rather a story on spiritual enlightenment and one of the few stories I’ve written where there is a major disaster that changes the course of human history.

I don’t like “dystopian” fiction. Novels that trace the history of the human race after a war, plague, or natural disaster kills almost everyone don’t appeal to me that much, though this story ended up being about a nuclear war—not between the major powers in the Western World but between India and China. Both of those nations are in the infamous “nuclear club,” they share disputed borders, and they have fought each other before (in ancient times and as recently as 1962).

“The Way to Shangri-La” centers around a young Indian woman, Jeevitha Mitra. From an early age, she has sought spiritual enlightenment and ends up living in an ashram (a sort of Hindu convent). She is devoted to this way of life and plans to live in celibacy (she sees sex as something that distracts from spiritual pursuits). Her devotion causes her to excel as an ashram girl. As she enters her late teen years she began to have frightening visions. They are “of fire … desolate, charred ground, and poisoned air, water, and soil … burned corpses and landscapes silent because the life on them had been stilled by poisonous air.” She confides what she has seen to the Abbess of the Ashram, who suggests she go to Pemakö an area on the border of  China and India and considered to be a sacred place.

Jeevitha walks for a month. Her level of spirituality protects her from wild animals and other harms. And as she goes along, her notions of the spiritual begin to change. She arrives at a village and eventually begins a relationship the Abbot of a Buddhist monastery and bears a child by him. She leaves the child with a friend and continues on until she comes to a cave high in the mountains near the border of China and India, who, she is told, are now at war. She journeys to the falls of the Tsangpo River and finds a cave to live in.

The magnificence of the setting stuns her:

Beauty lay all about her, stunning and magnificent, like nothing she had ever seen. Mountains rose toward the sky, stretching granite peaks into the blue where clouds brushed the summits. Thick jungles spread out in valleys. Patches of rhododendrons filled sunny vales, their red vivid against the grey and green. The Tsangpo River rushed madly down to the plains, cutting through narrow stone channels. Huge flocks of pigeons, solitary white herons and golden eagles flew through the sky. She saw takin, tigers, blood pheasant, and, once, a snow leopard. The beauty of the land awakened her to its sacred promises. She resolved to enter to the beauty.

This is another phase of her spiritual enlightenment. And a new revelation come to her. She must begin to live as the Hindu holy woman Madaeviyakka, who, hundreds of years ago, traveled the land as a wandering sage and teacher and wore no clothing.


Jeevitha thinks she must have gone mad but obeys the vision. Soon she is know as a holy teacher. People come to her to know wisdom and for healing. The people to whom she ministers tell her the war has spread and the Chinese have entered the province. She meets refugees. People advise her to leave the area but she stays.

One day she finds a young man, an American, wandering deliriously near her cave. She takes him in (and puts on a garment), heals his frostbite, and gives him what little food she has (Jeevitha hardly eats because her spiritual energy renews her body). The young man tells her the war has worsened:  there has been a nuclear exchange. Millions have died and several near-by cities had been hit. The nuclear fallout, he says, will settle there soon.
Her views change once more. She begins a relationship with the young America. She also is compelled to seek the place where the Goddess Dorje Drolo lives. She is, Jeevitha knows, a dangerous goddess, but feels compelled to go. Eventually she finds the pool of Dorje and her cave which is rumored to be the entrance to Shangri-La. She goes to fetch her boyfriend Alastair. There is an earthquake. The steep path to the cave is covered with debris that forms a ramp to the entrance.


The two of them go there. Soon they see refugees: tribal peoples, the mixture of peoples who live in the area, but soon Europeans, Africans, an endless procession of people and animals. She realizes they will go into the cave and into paradise. The poisoned radiation will not harm them there. They will be the beginning of a new race. She and Alastair, she knows as she watches all people enter, will be the last ones in. After that, the door will close.

The story appeared in Black Denim Review, a journal that is no longer published (this seems to be a trend for me). They do not maintain an archive.

You can, however, read my stories. I maintain links on my Facebook Page; and my latest novella, Sinfonia:  A Painted Lady, a vampire story, is available on Amazon with other of my books. Get it here.

Happy reading.

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